March 24, 2010

Most Retweeted Haiku's and Senryu's #11

crimson ribbon
tie her silky hair
hands crave for a touch.

withering leaves
tree lost its charm
exposing its another beauty. 

forlorn path
crossed by a withered heart
carrying broken frames

torn photograph
of my grandfather
holding me in his arms.

morning bells
ring in the temple
priests chanting mantras.

2 comments:

LadyinIndigo said...

These are really wonderful- you are so good at this! Keep up the good work.

wanderer said...

for a long time, i am trying to write haiku...but somewhere things get muddled....your compositions just made me make up my mind to give a whole thing another chance.

regards,
wanderer
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