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"Engulfed among the masses unknown, suffocation veiled her chaotic soul and then she realized the love that she snubbed sometime ago might have saved her imminent life if her ego would not have tampered between their hearts."
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16 comments:
Wonderfully written!
Love lost through pride, a disaster of broken hearts.
Quite a story in such short form. Excellent!
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sad to lose love for any reason .. this is the worst i guess !
Interesting take. I like the darkness and loneliness this piece invokes.
Powerful piece.
Thought cannot touch love, only the dreamer
Dark and moving! Good one!
Very deep!
colours lay bare my soul
Passionate and provacative!
lovely and deep..
Deep down the heart feelings!
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Beautiful :)
Perfect. 'Nough said! Love and Light, Sender
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Happy Weekend!
xxx
love your talent,
Hope to see you tomorrow at Monday Poetry Potluck!
ego always tampers :(
take care
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