loser..
failure..
neglectful..
upon the ground
I stood
wailing..
sobbing..
sniffing..
within myself
puffing the pain out
where I persist
among the forfeiters
becoming a regular slump
and watching my chums arise
under the sunshine
remaining in the shade
my sole being
challenging the pierces
of the everyday life
and uttering to myself,
"I will try."
8 comments:
Inspirational!
Loved this!
lovely try poem...
Achievement recognition or success does come later but the title and the last line of your poem is life itself, without it there is no future.
Nice poem on overcoming.
One of the best poems i've read...Loved the way you've penned this..
so well written, I loved this :o)
very inspiring indeed !! "I will try" is a big motivation in itself :)
Challenging the pierces of everyday life.... and this conveys all.. beautiful poem.. well thought out..
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