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| Image copyrighted by KJ Halliday |
'She walks in beauty like the night'
(as Byron's words behold my sight)
like a blazing fire stepping upon
the clouds doth tremble and softly moan
her golden hair soars in ecstasy
letting the breeze touch with fantasy
she is a magic, a soft-spoken dame
as heaven sighed when unperceived her name.
(This poem has been posted in association with One Stop Poetry Challenge. The beautiful image has been shot and copyrighted by KJ Halliday)
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15 comments:
Oh, that is just lovely. I wish I could write poetry like that. Beautiful.
Beautiful flow to your words and the photo and verbal image merge into a unified whole. Excellent work. Thank you, Gay @beachanny
What a rhyme, nicely done..this is chat up words
Magical, Byron-inspired lines. The picture and poetry combine so well with passionate intensity. Creates a Romantic feel. Great challenge response!
Fantasmagorial! Loved your take Pri, I don't know if I told you but ~I read through your work the day before. It was lovely to see you finally published on my kindle ;)
A perfect allusion and follow through. The ball hit the meat of the bat on this one. Pow! A nice feeling that goes from the hands and up the arms. She is unperceivable and that's what makes her so luscious.
A classic feel to modern photography.
Oh My God... thats a briliant poem.... heavens sighed when they unpercieved her name... Marvellous
ah yes - she is magic - beautiful take on the prompt
While heaven unperceived her name.
I have never seen the word unperceived. Interesting...I'll be thinking that one over...The Byronize is a great touch.
I have never seen the word unperceived used before...I thought on that a while... The Byroneeze was a very appropriate touch.
Feels wonderfully dream-like and floating, beautiful imagery you've used. Is she real or is she a fantasy?
'unperceived her name'
brilliant
smart take.
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