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It is ruined
and cracked
no man can save
as it is breathless.
No water
no air
to consume
its lost charm
for now it's gone forever
and it's time
for us to move
towards the same
for there's no one to be blamed
because.. It's Us!
It's human!
Who annihilated the land.
19 comments:
Touching .. and wise words .. We humans are now days ruining things more than we ever dreamed ..
Love the blog look :)
So true...sadly, but true.
very intersting take on this prompt, it is clever with such a great message.
Lovely piece and so true, let's hope there is some land left unspoilt for our children.
True words and a fine poem
Wonderful environmental poem! Wonderful mag!!
yep- once it is gone it is hard if not impossible to put back together as we meddle with nature.
Oh, a sad and possible outcome to this beautiful planet.
So true...what we are doing to earth....really killing her..and we call ourselves her children..ha aha..
Wonderful poem.
Well said - powerfully posed.
a very fresh angle to deal with the prompt ..liked it :)
Epic is the word. This one so simply brings out the adverse effects of our own living that we bring upon ourselves.
Good one Pri :)
Your timing is perfect for this Magpie!
A timely reminder of the delicate balance.
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Beautiful message here. Well done.
Many can relate to this!
it,s human.. wow great spech i gues :)
Scary thought, and something we all need to come to grips with. Nice take on the photo.
I totally share your sentiment, Priyanka..
We pretend like we don't know a thing.. but all the while, we are well aware of the root cause of this destruction! (sigh)
Very beautifully written...and so honest.. I really like that about your Magpie!
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