February 13, 2011

Valentines' night (Haiku Heights #30)

Valentines' night
you and me- and
the lasting impression of moonlight 




Haiku Heights

6 comments:

Uma Anandane said...

Lovely Valentine!.I would love to add a candle lit dinner with all the above :)

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Gemma Wiseman aka Pamela Adams said...

A beautiful, creative sense of romance in that last lingering line!

Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry said...

romantic one,
well done.

Hairyman said...

I love haiku and you just reinforced my love for it! Great work PB :)

chiccoreal said...

Delightful! All the things of a good heart!

Ramesh Sood said...

Why only the Valentine Night.. Moon shines quite often... (that's in a lighter vain) .. your haiku is actually magical..