March 13, 2011

Haiku Heights #34: Wings

behold the foliages
in this autumn wind
developing wings

5 comments:

Teri said...

I love that line, 'developing wings', such a beautiful visual.

Rajlakshmi said...

lovely imagery ... beautifully penned.

Jingle said...

love the whole piece.
stunning imagery.
Cheers.

Hyde Park Poetry Palace said...

awesome word panting.

Vinay Leo R. said...

a painting through words.. your take on it was eloquent, Priyanka! :)