March 19, 2011

Haiku Heights #35: Command

eight months later
the arrival of rain
-a farmers command


10 comments:

Ramesh Sood said...

Gives a lot of hope.. beautiful.. and thanks for visiting me.. A very Happy Holi to you...

Anonymous said...

If only a farmer could command rain, how wonderful that would be.

Nanka said...

Wish it would work always!!

Rumya said...

If only the rains would listen to the command....

Jingle said...

eventually it worked.
wow.

Jim said...

Priyanka, this brings back memories as I grew up on a farm.

Our, the farmers', version would be:

each night pray in praise
dear God it's rain soon we need
rain at Your command

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Jim said...

Also, I thank you for your OSI, One Single Impression, prompt for our week.

Your word was Sarcastic and I do hope I did you well in my acrostic poem. And I hope you will be posting your version here soon.
It is always nice to see how the creator of the prompts gives her/his word poetic treatment.
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Anonymous said...

well done.





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Vinay Leo R. said...

a command thats followed at last! well said..!

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