lights bid adieu
no more the birds
willing to stay
no more the birds
willing to stay
long way to go
dear moonlight-
please lead me home
grandfather's torch
getting dimmer
it's light exhausted
November 26, 2011
Light (Haiku Heights #96)
8 comments:
Excellent all the three.. I liked the last most.. you have created a beautiful yet perhpas a frail picture of a grandfather.. indeed time takes its toll.. Thanks..for ingeneous haiku..
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Nice haiku set..we always hope to find our way home, by torch or moonlight.
Nice to meet you ~
Very nice triplet Priyanka. The light is so strong ... thank you for sharing.
I enjoyed your Haiku set. Well done!
informative and homely Haikus.
Exquisite haiku. The last two are quietly profound.
it just took back me into those school days, used to wander in forest behind my grandfathers place.. in search of peacocks and rabbits :)
Nice work. I liked all three sets.
Melanie
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