February 4, 2012

Music (Haiku)

no music
I listen to the cherry blossoms
fall

winter eve

I still remember

the music of the tribes

rhythmless music

still so pleasant

the hummingbird's song

(Submitted in Haiku Heights blog)

Chèvrefeuille said...: Wow! Nicely done. I love the first one. Great image and for sure the falling of cherry blossom is nicer than music, but also sad.; February 4, 2012 at 1:17 PM
Madeleine Begun Kane said...: Lovely haiku; February 4, 2012 at 1:27 PM
becca givens said...: Beautiful set ~; February 4, 2012 at 10:12 PM
Karen said...: A lovely series.; February 4, 2012 at 11:05 PM
Grace said...: Nice ones..I like it when the haiku includes a touch of nature ~; February 5, 2012 at 12:29 AM
Anonymous said...: yes, bird song is a form of music

four craft of music senryu; February 5, 2012 at 3:56 AM
Maude Lynn said...: Wow! These are gorgeous!; February 5, 2012 at 9:27 AM
Magical Mystical Teacher said...: I somehow imagine the falling of the cherry blossoms as the sweetest music of all...

Yes to the Music; February 5, 2012 at 7:46 PM
Vinay Leo R. said...: The song does have a rhythm :) Maybe we are just too unfocused to hear it.; February 5, 2012 at 11:07 PM
Madeleine Begun Kane said...: Lovely haiku.; February 8, 2012 at 6:08 AM
Sri Valli said...: Lovely!!; February 9, 2012 at 8:09 PM