March 2, 2010

Most Retweeted Haiku's and Senryu's #6

being crapulous
your face as illusion
always in my eyes.

withering memories
of broken love
a melancholy song.

silent cave
ocean of darkness
mysterious stories inside.

2 comments:

Joanne Olivieri said...

Imagery is so eloquently displayed on all of these.

Anonymous said...

Hey!! just dropping by. I haven't been here a while and just wanted to see how you were doing. These are great Haiku's. I especially like the

"silent cave
ocean of darkness
mysterious stories inside"

Why? lol I think that I was simply attracted to the word ocean and that's why I like it so much. But they were really well thought up. Anyway I'm off for now...

Cheers!
Tunsie