September 20, 2010

Love's essence

Image via Stony River
bare foot-toes
he walks wearily
to feel being cared
holding each others hand
love's essence shared






(In association with Microfiction Monday #49 hosted by Stony River.)

17 comments:

Bill ~ {The Old Fart} said...

Wonderful Poem, you can feel the Love they share for each other.

Ellie Garratt said...

A couple in love. Beautifully lyrical poem.

Have a great week x

quilly said...

Sweet. Love does dissipate weariness.

Akelamalu said...

Ah they're in love. :)

Anonymous said...

cared for by each other and also by Mother Earth, walking barefoot can help in the latter - a lovely interpretation!

Michael G-G said...

You captured his weariness and her support wonderfully. Good job. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Have a great week.

Anonymous said...

I like your poem! Have a great week ahead. Cheers!

Pat said...

Beautiful poem, Priyanka! Love never fails.

John (@bookdreamer) said...

nice capture of the emotion My 140 Hope your week goes well

Diane said...

Sweet and romantic! :O)

One Prayer Girl said...

I just loved this picture and I think you put so much love into your words. Perfect.

PG

septembermom said...

Such a lovely thought. Thanks!

Deborah said...

Such a lovely one :o)

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

cool mm!

EG CameraGirl said...

Sweet! I like your positive spin on this picture. :)

KB said...

Beautiful.

Anonymous said...

beautiful poem.
so sweet....