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Delightful..
Within these tiny eyes..
Floating dreams..
Innocent screams..
Surmising the giant hidden..
Rising beyond the overridden..
A wish to reach the biggest star..
however high, however far..
forgetting the home bona fide..
towards the galaxy they ride..
away from the earth's reach..
triumphant in his eyesight..
(In association with Monday's Child at http://childrensverse.blogspot.com/)
12 comments:
enlightening piece,
love the flow.
Thanks for linking up with poetry potluck.
your entry is sure delicious....
Happy Tuesday!
" Floating dreams
Innocent screams "
wonderful words ...
thank you so much for joining us at Monday's Child...your poem is beautiful and delightful...filled with adventure..."no matter how high, no matter how far"...the universe is wide open for possiblities...thank you for sharing yours with us.I am looking forward to more...blessings...bkm
nice..
Perfection full of dreams and just right for Potluck!!! Thanks for linking! x
This is a beautiful poem and lovely poetic style. You created such a wonderful and delightful verse. Monday's Child sounds like an awesome meme prompt as well. Take care.
A wish to reach the biggest star
however wide, however far...
Sounds like all of us! LOL
Hi,
Moving words, nicely expressed.
First time here, enjoyed your take on the pic. Lovely read.. Thanks for your sweet comment on my HAIKU..
--Someone Is Special--
This is such a joyful fantasy poem. Love it!
You can feel their excitement ... I loved it!
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