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old cottage
a layer of winter snow
carpeting the footprints
hidden underneath
the disappeared time
December 2, 2010
Mag #43: Old Cottage
old cottage
a layer of winter snow
carpeting the footprints
hidden underneath
the disappeared time
8 comments:
Snow can cover a lot even a lost time.
Nicely worded observation :-)
never actually seen snow...
Love the way just 5 lines create such a powerful image! :)
Very nice - 'the disappeared time' is poignant and perfect.
Aaahh.. lovely words! Rich in meaning..
old cottages and snow.. what a deadly combination! Quite a chilling (but really nice) Magpie!
Sweet, short, succinct....
Beautiful. I love "disappeared time".
"The disappeared time",heavy with ambiguity.
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