January 5, 2011

Tiny Brains

Image via MagpieTales

tiny brains..

forming..

a piece of earth..

standing..

struggling..

to bring out the mirth..

hard- work..

labor..

all that pays..

similar to this..

the piece of stone..

mildly says.

Andreas said...: i love it's rhythm
it's lines move in and out
like tidal waves; January 5, 2011 at 2:58 AM
Andreas said...: This comment has been removed by the author.; January 5, 2011 at 2:58 AM
Uma Anandane said...: Lovely poem...happy magpie; January 5, 2011 at 4:04 AM
Paul Andrew Russell said...: Lovely writing. Great take on the prompt.; January 5, 2011 at 4:40 PM
Reflections said...: Love the ebb and flow, the rhythm beating forward, to encircle its meaning. well done.; January 6, 2011 at 10:31 AM
Kavita said...: Woww... loved the pace and tone of this one!! Brings out so many colors of life...
Kudos!; January 7, 2011 at 2:18 AM
Carmela-J said...: Interesting concept, love the short, flowing lines and the way your words seem to ebb and flow throughout.; January 8, 2011 at 5:13 PM
Anonymous said...: If all the stones could talk.. Like it a lot.; January 9, 2011 at 9:18 AM