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Behind blurry glasses
a story unknown
masking the truth
of the lives of the known.
The snow covered pitches
windows hidden
in the reflections blurred
a fact forbidden.
parched foliages
no oxygen to breath
the nakedness of trees
seeking spring to lead.
The eccentric emptiness
screaming the silence
no man no creature
no signs of violence.
a story unknown
masking the truth
of the lives of the known.
The snow covered pitches
windows hidden
in the reflections blurred
a fact forbidden.
parched foliages
no oxygen to breath
the nakedness of trees
seeking spring to lead.
The eccentric emptiness
screaming the silence
no man no creature
no signs of violence.
9 comments:
Really liked this, the subject matter and the style, loved 'the nakedness of trees seeking spring to lead.'
I am ready for spring to lead...
wonderful imagery. Nicely done!
Lovely rhymes & imagery.
"...seeking spring to lead" I love that.
Eccentric emptiness... creepy!
Yes, it's calm.. and OH YES, it gave me the chills too!!
Can be read in so many different ways, Priyanka! Awesome!
"The nakedness of trees
seeking spring to lead" - really liked these lines... but I have to say, I absolutely fell in love the title!! Simply perfection!
Wonderful title, followed by wonderful verse!
beautiful.
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