The day I saw you first- in the rain
your eyes gleamed, a sweet smile on your face
stopped the passing time and heartbeat
my senses freezed
a sudden moment of ease
offering a cup of coffee and sandwich
as your hands touch mine- by chance
freezing senses turned alive
the rain unstoppable
the unavoidable night
when love encountered
soul twinkled with a forever shine.
4 comments:
Love's first recognition, perfectly parsed!
"freezing senses turned alive" just from the slight touch of love. Very powerful.
Lovely, I love the line,"soul twinkled with a forever shine"!
love shines,
star alike..
stunning imagery, well portrayed love .
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