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Oh unknown ship!
where art thou destined?
I watch you everyday
passing on the same trail
this river unites us
so let us go together
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26 comments:
I really enjoyed this one. I wonder if they'll sail into the sunset together? Great MM.
Have a lovely week x
I like this :o)
That sounds very poetic :O)
Wherever the ship is headed, you've started it on a thought provoking journey!
Very nice quite poignant and beautiful at the same time. I hope she will be able to sail on her ship someday.
This is so positive and full of hope..well done!
Mine is up
Have you a Blessed Week!
hugs
shakira
This is a nice little verse. It says so much, in so few words. Lots of places to go with this. 2 thumbs up!
This picture was taken off San Juan Island in Puget Sound on American soil, but the land across the sea is British Columbia. Your verse very much captured the magical and wistful beauty of that bit of rugged coastline.
Is she dreaming that the love of her life could be on that very ship? It's a possibility.
This chimes with me - I long to travel with the ships I see, but I suspect the imagining is better than the reality :-)
I'm ready to pack up and go too! :O)
Should her wish come true there is no telling how it will turn out. I always wish I knew in advance.
Very nice Micro-Fiction.
PG
Should her wish come true there's no way of knowing exactly how it will turn out. I always want to know in advance.
PG
Looking for a voyage is tempting. Hope her wish comes true soon.
fingers crossed My 140 Hope your week goes well
I'm ready for the journey. Well done. Have a good week ahead :)
Nice piece of writing. Very evocative.
Have a great week.
And will their paths truly ever cross? Nice one.
I just loved this thoughtful
piece
I felt its quietness
This is good. Hope you have a great week. Cheers!
Lovely poetic language...wistful and yearning. Nicely done!
Good take on the picture. :)
I always say if they hang around long enough they will want to go with you.
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Excellent my friend. Let's hope they do get to set sail together. Beautiful. Have a wonderful week ahead :)
I liked it.. very beautiful and pognant... as someone once said, y have different routes when we have the same destination
i'd like to go along...
Nice job on the microfiction. Seeing her embrace the risk-taker in herself is a great touch.
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