September 27, 2010

Microfiction Monday #50: 140 characters

Image via Stony River

Oh unknown ship!
where art thou destined?
I watch you everyday 
passing on the same trail
this river unites us
so let us go together







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26 comments:

Ellie Garratt said...

I really enjoyed this one. I wonder if they'll sail into the sunset together? Great MM.

Have a lovely week x

Deborah said...

I like this :o)

Anonymous said...

That sounds very poetic :O)

SouthLakesMom said...

Wherever the ship is headed, you've started it on a thought provoking journey!

Bill ~ {The Old Fart} said...

Very nice quite poignant and beautiful at the same time. I hope she will be able to sail on her ship someday.

Unknown said...

This is so positive and full of hope..well done!

Mine is up

Have you a Blessed Week!
hugs
shakira

David said...

This is a nice little verse. It says so much, in so few words. Lots of places to go with this. 2 thumbs up!

quilly said...

This picture was taken off San Juan Island in Puget Sound on American soil, but the land across the sea is British Columbia. Your verse very much captured the magical and wistful beauty of that bit of rugged coastline.

Akelamalu said...

Is she dreaming that the love of her life could be on that very ship? It's a possibility.

jabblog said...

This chimes with me - I long to travel with the ships I see, but I suspect the imagining is better than the reality :-)

Diane said...

I'm ready to pack up and go too! :O)

One Prayer Girl said...

Should her wish come true there is no telling how it will turn out. I always wish I knew in advance.

Very nice Micro-Fiction.

PG

One Prayer Girl said...

Should her wish come true there's no way of knowing exactly how it will turn out. I always want to know in advance.

PG

septembermom said...

Looking for a voyage is tempting. Hope her wish comes true soon.

John (@bookdreamer) said...

fingers crossed My 140 Hope your week goes well

Anonymous said...

I'm ready for the journey. Well done. Have a good week ahead :)

Michael G-G said...

Nice piece of writing. Very evocative.

Have a great week.

hope said...

And will their paths truly ever cross? Nice one.

Suz said...

I just loved this thoughtful
piece
I felt its quietness

Anonymous said...

This is good. Hope you have a great week. Cheers!

Pat said...

Lovely poetic language...wistful and yearning. Nicely done!

Jim said...

Good take on the picture. :)

I always say if they hang around long enough they will want to go with you.
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Anonymous said...

Excellent my friend. Let's hope they do get to set sail together. Beautiful. Have a wonderful week ahead :)

Abhilasha-The Desire said...

I liked it.. very beautiful and pognant... as someone once said, y have different routes when we have the same destination

tilden talks... said...

i'd like to go along...

Sioux Roslawski said...

Nice job on the microfiction. Seeing her embrace the risk-taker in herself is a great touch.