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One more night of your departure..
breaking my heart.
As I see the soft wind in motion,
wrenching my soul's deepest emotion,
a night without your face's reflection,
breaking my heart.
Fantasies wild, your touch missing,
the gleam in your eyes while kissing,
moments bygone are worth cherishing,
this loneliness in your absence
breaking my heart.
The moon fading in the night so dark,
whereas my musings seek a place to embark,
fire blazing in agony, do you hark?
This long night of distress
breaking my heart.
19 comments:
Sadness emanates from the words above...
Nothing hurts more than the pain of love...
Well written!
sad,
powerfully expressed emotions.
lovely magpie.
I loved the repetition of the line, just wonderful to read.
Sad but beautiful words.
How utterly SAD! I know that love hurts but this seems hopeless. Great writing, well done.
The loss of someone's love felt so deeply here.
Its loveliness is as powerful as the sadness that builds up.
The absence is expressed beautifully in the poem
"...my musings seek a place to embark." Great line.
I have seen your artwork posted here on blogspot. I liked it. I follow your blog regularly. I hope you would like to look at my articles about paintings.
Mughal Miniatures
Paintings of Mistresses: Fetching Millions
Such sadness, beautifully expressed.
Powerful. Beautiful melancholy.
Pain and longing emanate, touching the heart with tenderness, contrasting the empty lone hours.
This really touches the heart, Priyanka. I once wrote a poem such as this, for a long ago love. I miss him to this day and your poem triggered so many memories and I had to fight back tears.
Hello Priyanka - Thank you for visiting my blog and commenting on my Camera Critters. I'm sorry to be so late replying.
I have been looking at your Lens and Verses blog and enjoyed your Magpie Tale, and your Microfiction Monday.
-- K
Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
Ack.. felt this one, Priyanka...
That dark emotion called 'pain' has been so beautifully expressed here...
Very evocative, this one..
Totally loved the last stanza!! It was simply too good!!!
Departures...this poem wrings with longing.
Agony night after night...wrenches soul's deepest emotions. Parting of the beloved is heart breaking. This emotion is powerfully translated into letters. I laud your crafts(wo)manship.
- Makineedi Surya Bhaskar,
Kakinada(Andhra Pradesh)
Beautiful..
I am lovin it..
Do visit my blog,posted my first poetry titled-"The Poet In Me, Inspired By You !
http://manishchauhanx.blogspot.com
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