February 21, 2011

Old Asylum: Microfiction Monday #71

Image via StonyRiver.ie

Pom & Mary plays hide & seek
no they can't be seen running out there
the old asylum's quiet out of fear
their spirit found every Friday 13th

12 comments:

Anyes said...: Very scary....Good one :-); February 21, 2011 at 12:55 PM
Gemma Wiseman aka Pamela Adams said...: Love the idea of spirits wandering on Friday 13th! Disturbing!; February 21, 2011 at 1:48 PM
gaelikaa said...: Scary; February 21, 2011 at 2:47 PM
Lisa Ricard Claro said...: You used Friday the 13th well...I got the image immediately. Scary, and well done!; February 21, 2011 at 4:48 PM
Linda O'Connell said...: I am new to micro fiction and discovered your blog. While your post is great, I find your poem SILENCE, intriguing. I signed on to follow your blog, please do the same http://lindaoconnell.blogspot.com/; February 21, 2011 at 6:21 PM
Peggy said...: The hallway does look scary and dark. Perfect for spirits that run! Just great!; February 21, 2011 at 9:04 PM
Diane said...: Spooky one to keep me thinking. Good one. :O); February 21, 2011 at 11:08 PM
Sylvia K said...: That hallway spooked me the first time I looked at the pic! You've captured it perfectly with your words! Have a great week!

Sylvia; February 21, 2011 at 11:44 PM
Maude Lynn said...: Spooky!; February 22, 2011 at 12:06 AM
Melanie Sherman said...: I'm thinking they are ghosts. Whoo hoo, good one.; February 22, 2011 at 9:26 AM
Michael G-G said...: I have afeeling their spirits are around not just on Friday the 13th!

Good one. Thanks for the comment on mine. Hope your week is going well.; February 23, 2011 at 4:50 AM
Anonymous said...: I am so glad that I didn't read this on Friday the 13th! Good micro fiction this week. Cheers~; February 23, 2011 at 8:25 AM