empty lake
no more the herons
gathering in this space
no space for me
the vacant seats
filled with coffee spills
spaces in his wallet
where only old bills found
of their last date
December 3, 2011
Space- Haiku Heights #97
spaces in his wallet
where only old bills found
of their last date
12 comments:
nice haiku set.. i like your creativity of space specially the second one ~
were the coffee spills still wet?
very beautiful all of them..
Nice series of Haiku ~~
well said :)
Voila!!! I was enamored by the way u brought three different situations and concept and stitched them together..:)
beautiful...the last one ah!! is heart aching...
PS: Since I'm a novice when it comes to writing a haiku..cud u temme hw this one was written, coz I can see that its not a 5-7-5 set...
would wait for ur rply on my blog:)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fQ8B-Wl_trQ
Nice set of Haiku. Well done.
Melanie
Memories tale...nice haiku..
Nice group of haiku...I like the second the best..vacant seats filled with coffee spills
smart one.
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